Heres a tune I made, very inspired by Shpongle

WOW.  :shock:
This is very top notch stuff here!
Its like an uuber-ambient shponglish track.

I love the sound and feel of the song. Its great.

I have a couple suggestions,
I would maybe have the track evolve a bit more.
Around 3:00 my initial interest started to wear off.
Maybe bring in a dynamic pad at that point?
Theres also a lack of “low end” synths. Everything seemed to be in the upper fields.
It makes it feel a little “unprofessional”.
My try adding in a more dynamic bassline or mid-low synth.
and/or EQ the final mix with a little more bass.

Again, the ideas here are fantastic!
I just think it could be a little more dynamic and powerful.

What equipment you using?

Hey, Thanks for the comments!

Yeah, I’ve noticed that too, that there is way too little low-end/midfrequencies.
Could use a little work through a mastering device.

I’m still very new to mastering, I think that is the hardest part of music making; mastering and mixing.

I’m using Renoise 1.9, Sampletank VSTi, + a whole bunch of other plugins.

I’ve used Izotope Ozone for mastering.

nice track ... nice sounds and melo ... maybe a little more reverb on the percussion at the beginning would be good ..anyway very psy and peacefull ... good job mister

hey thanks!

Hard working on a project like this cuz the PC kept freezing due to the amount of plugins. I seriously need to upgrade my ram soon.

hey

here is my opinion. it need to get thicker. to few sounds, not much happening, and i cant stand the hiphop clapping sound :p you have some sweet sounds though

Wow, it’s really nice! Feels amazing!

Nice feel to the track. Sets a lovely vibe and that is the most important. I can agree with some of the tips given but overall a really cool effort.