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Posted: 13 November 2009 10:34 AM   [ Ignore ]  
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My new tune is up and I named it “Cumulus Humilis Travelers” becouse that whats appeard in my head when i was ready with it and listened the whole thing through. But imagine cumulus himilis in late sundown traveling a foreign country.

It begins with a gentle guitarpart + solo and around 1:35 the drums comes in. 2:30 the drums get a little more intense and it gets in to a long goa-like part before the nice outro.

Please listen and tell me what you think of the song, and what you think off when you hear it smile

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Posted: 13 November 2009 10:52 AM   [ Ignore ]   [ # 1 ]  
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Posted: 13 November 2009 09:36 PM   [ Ignore ]   [ # 2 ]  
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Cool song, love the work on the guitars. But if I were you, I’d “upgrade” a little bit the synth that comes at 1:36, even though it fits better later in the song, at first it sounds kind of raw. Just tweak the sound a little bit, give it more character.

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Posted: 13 November 2009 10:03 PM   [ Ignore ]   [ # 3 ]  
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Posted: 13 November 2009 10:51 PM   [ Ignore ]   [ # 4 ]  
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Hi Jazzah, had a listen to Cumulus and it’s a good track. My only issue with it is the hihat. If it were my track I would have chosen a more organic sounding (real) sample rather than a synthesized one. I agree with generix about the guitar work, though - really lovely.

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