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Posted: 25 February 2010 11:35 PM   [ Ignore ]  
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I just finished my new tune, i really hope you like it:
http://hellomellow.bandcamp.com/track/cave-dwellers?autoplay=true

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Posted: 26 February 2010 12:36 AM   [ Ignore ]   [ # 1 ]  
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Pretty Cool Track…IC Otts Huckleberry horn in there. Only criticism is it was a bit repetitive on that main lick. But hey its Dub!! All in all mix sounds OK..Enjoyed it.
What did you use?

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Posted: 26 February 2010 12:37 AM   [ Ignore ]   [ # 2 ]  
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Huckeberry horn? You mean the Melodica?
Maybe a little repetitive, I’ll have to work on that for the next tune wink

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Posted: 26 February 2010 05:09 AM   [ Ignore ]   [ # 3 ]  
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Hey man I liked it. I can agree with Dimentagon, the only criticism would be that its somewhat repetitive. Not bad though good job.

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Posted: 27 February 2010 09:32 AM   [ Ignore ]   [ # 4 ]  
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Hello, fellow Norwegian smile

Lovely atmosphere and overall a great track. Looking forward to hearing more of your stuff. Also check out my tunes by clicking the links in my signature wink

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Posted: 28 February 2010 02:31 PM   [ Ignore ]   [ # 5 ]  
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HelloMellow - 26 February 2010 12:37 AM

Huckeberry horn? You mean the Melodica?

Sorry dude see the Twisted video “The interview with Ott…his words not mine”

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Posted: 01 March 2010 05:34 AM   [ Ignore ]   [ # 6 ]  
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Yeeaaah this is nice, its got a really smooooth tone to it smile me likes

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Posted: 17 March 2010 04:58 AM   [ Ignore ]   [ # 7 ]  
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Yeah like the dub style man! The snare delays are cool, Bassline is nice and smooth and the rest of the synths fit it. I wouldn’t say it is a repetative in the sense that it dosn’t progress, the track progresses nicely in the way lots of complimenting synths come in and out, and they are REALLY nice dude I mean that. However I can see why people are saying its repetative, I think its that high pithced “bell” type synth that plays through the whole track. Cutting that out every so often would really help matters in my opinion. If you wanted to you could also have a chord change, where the chord sequences switches up complete, I know it’ld be alot of work but it’ld really add to it for me. Just switching up the melody/chords a little bit more would be a deciding factor over weither to buy it or not.

Other than that I don’t mean to sound critical, because honestly I listed to it from start to finish and it is generally a REALLY nice track keep up the good work and keep me updated on anything new please.

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Posted: 17 March 2010 08:58 PM   [ Ignore ]   [ # 8 ]  
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Thanks for the feedback, I know, I tend to get a little repetitive :/ I’ll try to change up the chords a little in my next tune smile
There are another track on my bandcamp site i just uploaded.. It’s an old tune but i still like it smile actually it’s my first “serious” tune :p

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Posted: 19 December 2010 01:21 PM   [ Ignore ]   [ # 9 ]  
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Awesome track man.  The only thing I would suggest is to put more reverb on the snare drum (like right at 2:02).  It seems kind of staccato when it’s not ringing.  Other than that, excellent, and I LOVE the dub delays and effects.  Very cool.

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Posted: 31 March 2011 11:37 AM   [ Ignore ]   [ # 10 ]  
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Wow that’s amazing, Love it!
The delayed drums, the bassline, synth noises, really chill lovely dub!
And i like the melodica, I’m buying one tonight actually cheese

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