http://soundcloud.com/psilocyborg/panaeolus

I’d love to get some feedback on the song itself, and maybe some pointers on mixing.  I haven’t even begun educating myself on mastering techniques either, so any help in that area would be appreciated.  Also, I rendered it as a 24-bit wav, and it seems to have lost some of its presence, so I’m wondering if I should turn it up to 32-bit and play around with with dithering options as well?

anywho, thanks in advance.